Congratulations! 3 Aringo clients were accepted to Berkeley (out of 6 clients who applied!)

Aringo's Berkeley admission rate: 50%.

Congratulations! 3 Aringo clients were accepted to Duke (out of 6 clients who applied!)

Aringo's Duke admission rate: 50%.

Congratulations! 3 Aringo clients were accepted to LBS (out of 6 clients who applied!)

Aringo's LBS admission rate: 50%.

Congratulations! 3 Aringo clients were accepted to Michigan (out of 7 clients who applied!)

Aringo's Michigan admission rate: 43%.

Congratulations! 4 Aringo clients were accepted to Columbia's September 2012 intake (out of 9 clients who applied!)

Aringo's Columbia admission rate: 44%.

Congratulations! 4 Aringo clients were accepted to INSEAD (out of 6 clients who applied!)

Aringo's INSEAD admission rate: 67%.

Congratulations! Three Aringo clients were accepted to Wharton in 2011!

Aringo's Wharton admission rate is more than 50% higher than Wharton’s regular admission rate.

Congratulations! 8 Aringo clients were accepted to Duke in 2011 (out of 9 clients who applied!)

Aringo's Duke admission rate: 89%. Duke regular admission rate: 24%.

Aringo's Stanford admission rate: 27%. Stanford regular admission rate: 6%.

Congratulations! 5 Aringo clients were accepted to UCLA in 2011 (out of 6 clients who applied!)

Aringo's UCLA admission rate: 83%. UCLA regular admission rate: 29%

Congratulations! 5 Aringo clients were accepted to IE in 2011 (out of 5 clients who applied!)

2 Aringo clients were accepted to Cambridge in 2011 (out of 2 clients who applied!)

Congratulations! An Aringo client has been accepted to Wharton with a $50,000 scholarship

An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 600, has been accepted to Duke!

Two Aringo clients have been accepted to Stanford with $30,000 scholarships

An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 580, has been accepted to Harvard!

Congratulations! An Aringo client has been accepted to Harvard with a $65,000 scholarship

An Aringo client, with a GMAT 640, has been accepted to Wharton!

An Aringo client has been accepted to UCLA with a $35,000 scholarship

An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 670, has been accepted to Harvard!

Three Aringo clients have been accepted to Chicago with scholarships of $130,000 each!

Congratulations! An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 630, has been accepted to INSEAD!

Two Aringo clients have been accepted to Chicago with scholarships of $110,000 each

Two Aringo clients, GMAT 660, accepted to Harvard! (MBA)

Congratulations! Two Aringo clients have been accepted to Chicago with scholarships of $125,000 each

An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 640, has been accepted to Kellogg!

An Aringo client has been accepted to NYU with a $45,000 scholarship

An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 660, has been accepted to Wharton!

Congratulations! Four Aringo clients have been offered $20,000 scholarships to attend Stanford

An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 630, has been accepted to LBS!

An Aringo client has been accepted to Darden with a $34,000 scholarship

Congratulations! An Aringo client has been accepted to Columbia with a $30,000 scholarship

An Aringo client, with a GMAT of 640, has been accepted to Duke!

An Aringo client has been offered a $40,000 scholarship to attend Tuck

Two Aringo clients with GMAT scores of 640 have been accepted to INSEAD!

An Aringo client has been offered a $22,000 scholarship to attend Kellogg

Three Aringo clients with GMAT scores of 680 have been accepted to MIT! (MBA)

Two Aringo clients have received $25,000 scholarships to attend Wharton

Congratulations! Five Aringo clients have been accepted to Michigan with a $20,000 scholarship each

 

Successfully Negotiating the Essay Maze

By Gil Levi


Writing the application essays is usually the hardest part of the MBA admission process. Below are a few guidelines to help you successfully negotiate the writing process.

  1. Prepare your strategy
    Before writing the essays, take some time to familiarize yourself with the MBA program’s requirements of its candidates and with your qualities as a candidate. Below is an example of some recommended basic steps:
    1. Note the candidate evaluation criteria ("Admission Drivers") used by the MBA program you are applying to.
      You may consult the program’s website, current students, alumni, online forums, guidebooks, and services such as Aringo in order to draft an up-to-date list of criteria.
      Next to each criterion, estimate the weight given to it in the application process.
    2. Write down what you, as a candidate, can offer in respect to each one of these criteria.
      These are the main messages you seek to convey through the essays.
    3. Allocate each message to one or more essays. Use the aforementioned criteria weights to determine the extent of and emphasis used to present each message.

  2. Convey clear messages
    Life isn't so clear-cut. Attempts at describing the path we have taken thus far, and our plans for the future, often require complex explanations and descriptions. 
    It is important to remember that the reader of your essays may be unfamiliar with your industry. Moreover, remember that application essay readers go through hundreds of essays within a short period of time. Your messages must be clear, crisp, short, focused, and easily identifiable in order to help the reader, whose task is to evaluate your candidacy based on the Admission Committee’s evaluation criteria.
     
  3. Make use of conjunctions
    Use conjunctions (such as However, Therefore, Thus, Furthermore, Moreover, Nevertheless) to connect phrases and/or paragraphs. Smooth transitions will help you write clearly and coherently. Moreover, such transitions help the reader follow the text and stay focused.
     
  4. Be personal
    Use concrete, personal, and factual examples to illustrate your point. It is a good idea to avoid general statements, stereotypical phrases, and clichés.

  5. Vary your vocabulary
    Using a thesaurus is highly recommended.
    Essays that make use of a limited vocabulary with often repeated words tend to wear out the reader, and often fail to achieve their objective.
     
  6. Do your homework
    Writing a strong “Why our school” essay requires comprehensive research on each university you apply to.
    Sentences such as “I made Columbia my top choice because of its strong alumni network, distinguished faculty, and excellent reputation” are an effective way to ensure rejection. These kinds of sentences show that you failed to recognize the program’s unique character. They also suggest that you did not devote enough time to identifying why you are a strong candidate for this particular school, rather than any other program.
    In addition to reviewing the university’s website, speak to students and alumni. Make use of online forums to gather up-to-date information about the school, so that you can present a compelling case as to why you chose this specific MBA program.

  7. Be unique
    Write a unique, personal essay. You want the readers to pore over your essay not only as part of their duty as Admissions Committee members, but also because they are intrigued. Like any good author, use techniques such as suspense, subheadings, an intriguing introduction and a little humor to capture the reader’s attention. The last thing you want to write is an essay that sounds exactly like the five others read by the Admissions Committee member that week.

  8. Answer the question
    It may seem obvious, but make sure you remembered to do it: Answer the question!
    No less, and not much more.


Good Luck!
The Aringo Team

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