This text should be very noticeable (separate, short paragraph).

DO NOT USE the exact words which appear below. Keep the meaning, but use somewhat different words.

 

  • Ideally, this text will be something like: “According to our Company’s executive staffing plan for the next 5 years, Danny will be appointed the Company’s XXX in the YYY Division in August 2018.”
  • Another ideal formulation:
    “Our Company offered Danny the position of XXX in the YYY Division and he accepted the offer.”
  • A weaker version than this:
    “Upon his MBA graduation, Danny will be appointed the Company’s XXX.”
  • An even weaker version than the above:
    “Our company is planning to appoint Danny as its XXX in August 2018”.
  • An even weaker version than the above:
    “I am planning to appoint Danny as the company’s XXX in August 2018”.
  • An even weaker than the above:
    “The Company will be happy to have Danny become the XXX after his graduation”.